At just over 2,500 words, Spanking My Sister fails to deliver on the fraternal flogging the title infers.
Why I Read It
I think it goes without saying that I read Spanking My Sister, because I wanted to read about someone spanking their sister. Unfortunately, I didn’t get too much of that.
What I did get a lot of, was some less than stellar formatting, and a strong suspicion that English is not the author’s first language.
I can forgive editing errors, and as a polyglot myself, I don’t mind that the phrasing was a bit odd at times.
But I paid for sister-spanking, and there wasn’t much.
What I Liked About It
I liked the parts where the main character, Jason, spanked his 20 year old sister. I know that she was 20 years old, because it was mentioned a lot.
I also liked a particular sentence. I liked it so much, that I wish I would have thought of it.
I fucked her so hard and so fast that the walls would speak of the hole tearing for eons to come.
What Could Have Been Better
There could have been more sister spanking. If I recall, there were only 4 pages of it; ebook pages, mind you.
I’ll let you in on a little secret: while I have an appreciation for the classic kink, BDSM isn’t really my thing.
So, when I’m up for some spanking, it’s a rare day indeed. And I was up for it, which is why I read Spanking My Sister.
And I didn’t get it; or at least, I didn’t get much.
Anastasia’s Parlor Rating
I give Shonali Saxena’s Spanking My Sister two stars, because it fails to deliver on its promise to spank a sister. I truly believe she needed a thorough flogging.
Spanking My Sister does succeed at fucking her so hard and so fast that the walls would speak of the hole tearing for eons to come… but that’s not what what I paid for.
If you’re interested, you can read Shonali Saxena’s other work here.
If you’re into brother-sister romance, check out my book series, Beloved.
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